GamingPixelShow wrote:please leave some suggestions!
Sometimes you jump around in your review when you're talking about certain things (gameplay, 3D, etc.) Maybe, if you don't already, write out what you're going to talk about. Make a sheet of brief points you are going to discuss so you can glance at it while talking. Or you could discuss each part separately and edit them together in the final review. Also, the pronunciation of some of your words were slightly messed up. Maybe in future videos you could edit those mistakes if you broke down the video in certain segments (I'm not sure if you are able to do that though).
Other than that, I really like your reviews. You have lots of enthusiasm!
please leave some suggestions!
Sometimes you jump around in your review when you're talking about certain things (gameplay, 3D, etc.) Maybe, if you don't already, write out what you're going to talk about. Make a sheet of brief points you are going to discuss so you can glance at it while talking. Or you could discuss each part separately and edit them together in the final review. Also, the pronunciation of some of your words were slightly messed up. Maybe in future videos you could edit those mistakes if you broke down the video in certain segments (I'm not sure if you are able to do that though).
Other than that, I really like your reviews. You have lots of enthusiasm!
Suggestion: Please focus on your face and not the back wall.
Other than that - good job!
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