I agree with Motherbra1n, your commentary was not bad, but you need more (and larger) gameplay footage. Also, as much as I agree with your review of the game, try not to repeat yourself too often in the video. There were a few points where you said the same things twice, also try and cut back on "like and "but." Maybe break it into segments (Gameplay, controls, graphics, music, etc...) then recap at the end. All of which you did, but it felt loosely organized.
I did like that you found good points in the game to point out, even though it may be hard to do for this game (it's a meh for sure...)
Try and touch on some details a little more as well, you talked about how you switched from analog control to stylus, but u didn't mention the use of the x and b button (not a big deal, but still).
Lastly, how did you come up with the 6/10 rating? First I don't agree, it's not a 6 it's much lower, though that's your choice to make not mine, but mainly try and give some meaning to the rating by giving it backing. If it's a 6/10 what would it take to make it a 7? Personally, I would try to stay away from rating too highly (which most reviewers do), it is OK for a good (average) game to be a 7.
On the overall though, good work. It takes a lot to put something like this together and to be open to public feedback.
Keep at it, and if RMC keeps posting, I'll keep watching.